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The Battle (To Robin)
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The Battle (To Robin) |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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The Battle The battle is hard I know this for sure You can win if you want Don’t give in to the lure To give in is the easiest To fight it is hard To want to just say ‘that’s enough’ And let yourself lose Don’t let that happen, We don’t want you to go You’re too loved in here And in the world around How can you give up when You still have so many people to bless By entering their lives? So many laughs to have, So many tears to cry; Both happy and sad “Keep on Rockin” You know what that means? It means you have too much ahead of you to give up. I made you promise to not give up But I know that sometimes it will be difficult to keep Just send me an email, and I’ll help you out Don’t let yourself lose this I promise I’ll be there to help you out. Just wanted to say I love ya chicky!   You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwwwwwwwww! my rhonda loves me! hehe! thks for the poem i loved it and yes it will be difficult to keep that promise. tks rhonda! it was great! *hugs* robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Awwwwwwwwww wow Sky, that was beautiful. Very sweet, and wonderfully written. I loved it!!!  Robin, I have to echo all that she said. Keep your head up, and email anytime. I wil reply in time. Much love from me and all of us in pip.Sincerely, Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Listen to her Robin, she knows what she is talking about. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Awww that rocks, many hugs to Robin and Rhonda a wonderful piece of poetry Rhon, I'd like to see more of your work around here in the future Andrew The silence is more beautiful than you will ever know |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Rhon... this is incredibly sweet! *hugs* This is a beautifully-written tribute to a deserving gal. Thanks for sharing this with us. I'm sure she liked it as much as we did --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
gimme an R gimme an H gimme an O gimme an N gimme an D gimme an A what does that spell? RHONDA! GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO RHONDA! hehe! love me and rhonda for ti loves us! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
LOL! Thanks you guys. If I were a blusher, I'd be... wait, I am a blusher. Well, since I've gotten requests for my work at least three times in the past week, I will start writing again. Whatever pleases my public! You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
sorry to spoil your party. I think that the site is just neat and that I would have to vist. love to chat but supper is on luv the RUBBER BAND PS I love your poem |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
AMY!!!!!!!! What the heck?!?!? Okay, I'm really blushing now! You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
I am very sorry, but I don't mean for you to blush!!!!! gotta go |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
you say sorry to much love me and rhonda for ti loves us! |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Awww this was soo sweet!! Nicely done!!!  ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
LOL. LMAO@ the shinanigans going on...  Sincerely, Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very nice, Rhon. It's great having people like that to pull you back up when you need it... *poke* Write something else.  ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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