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Zombie Man
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0 posted 2001-12-31 09:28 PM


Come with me my love,
Take my hand and don't look back.
Focus now, on what waits for us ahead.
In time I hope to show you,
What you mean to me.

The things you have done for me,
The things you do for me,
And the things you will do for me,
All things that I'm grateful for having you.
In my dark times, you should me the light.

I never know how may I repay you,
For everytime you have saved me from pain.
I never know if you weren't here,
What would my life be.
I'm just so grateful for having you.

Now I stand here,
Taller and stronger then before.
My heart and my mind,
Have changed while next to your side.
Now, my soul has true love inside.

You are heaven sent,
That one angel who claims my heart.
I don't know why I have you here,
But I will nver throw that away.
I'm just so grateful for having you.

© Copyright 2001 Michael Cheeseman II - All Rights Reserved
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2002-01-01 11:02 PM


I like how you set up your
stanzas. Love is a great
thing... Good job!

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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
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2 posted 2002-01-02 12:15 PM


I love that..aww..keep up the good work!

"Water Over Matter"

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3 posted 2002-01-02 09:09 PM


very very sweet, I like this!

"...and she swears there's nothing wrong
I hear her playin that same ol song"~Fuel~Bad Day

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4 posted 2002-01-03 06:30 PM


Wow... beautiful work!  Very sewet poem.  I enjoyed this.  Well done!

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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