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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-12-30 05:11 PM

Yesterday has faded,
Tommorrow doesn't have a shadow,
Today I breath.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

1 posted 2001-12-30 05:27 PM

Ah! If only everyone had your outlook! Nothin beats today....nothin! I liked it a lot!

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

2 posted 2001-12-30 07:44 PM

wow that was short but very deep I loved it. Its a nice way to look at how to live. live for today not tomorrow or yesterday

great poem keep it up.

Don't make me get my flying monkeys :P

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

3 posted 2001-12-30 08:48 PM

So short but so long it seems the meaning is longer then the poem itself i loved it.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2001-12-30 08:56 PM

Your poem has a lot of meaning for being such a short poem I like it.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

prov1717
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since 2001-12-26

Posts 74
NE

5 posted 2001-12-30 11:14 PM

beautiful. short. sweet. so true.

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2002-01-02 06:35 PM

Short and sweet.... I enjoyed it.

Titus

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2002-01-03 06:12 PM

I loved this, Eliza... Very calming words you wrote. "Today, I breathe". You're taking one day at a time. That's the only right way to do it...

I enjoyed this muchos! Thanks for sharing..

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

8 posted 2002-01-03 06:53 PM

I founds this very optomistic (spell check, anyone?)! I suppose the "shadow" would be the things that gloom over us, the heavy stuff...the e-e-e-evil stuff. *nods* ^_^ Very nice. Thanks for sharing!

++ Leah ++

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

9 posted 2002-01-03 09:29 PM

Breathing is a wonderful thing. I loved this very much.

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