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Baby_Angel123 Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 63Unity, ME 
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Everyday she goes to school, with a smile upon her face. She has lots of friends, and gets along with everyone. She always makes it to class on time, and never gets bad grades. She never gets in trouble, and is always willing to help, someone when they are at need. She makes it look as thought, she has a wonderful life. But it is all an act, her life is not wonderful, in fact it is the pits. For she dreads going home at 2:00 p.m.. cause she knows, that as soon as she walks through the door, she has to deal with her parents. They make her wait on them hand and foot, and if she does not do it when they say, they ground her, and tell her how she is nothing, but a disappointment and does not deserve to live. They tell her that they wish, she was never born, and that the only thing she is good for, is waiting on them hand and foot. She cries herself to sleep every night, cause she knows, they could care less about her. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This reminds me a lttle of the way my life is. A mask can destroy you, in the end you've just squashed yourself down. You become self-destructive at one point. Its not good, because you end up hurting the people who do care. This was a really good poem, keep on writing. Regina |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I know people who are just like that.. It is sad, people need to see behind the masks in order to know the person. great poem though. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Someday we'll be free from the mistakes of our parents. The funny thing is, we'll go on to make mistakes of our own as parents. Hopefully though, we'll learn from their mistakes to help us be better. Thanks for sharing this.  The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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Autumn Child New Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 5 |
This was real sad. I bet alot of kids live like this  I like it though  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so sad....I think you should tell someone...and Autumn Child, you are the one who is waited on hand and foot sweetie  (my daughter) "...and she swears there's nothing wrong |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very sad. It angers me that so many have to live this way. You should feel very lucky for having a mom that loves you so much I loved this write. Very well-done, and I look forward to seeing more... --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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Lil_Angel123 Junior Member
since 2001-12-16
Posts 13 |
Hey hun, i know a bunch of people like that. i wrote a poem just like it the other day. lylas. Amanda |
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