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Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-12-28 08:35 PM

I regret not having said that I was sorry
And how much it hurt to know that I've caused
All of the pain you've had of late
I regret having said "lets do"
And damning you to a hell much greater than mine own
Where you'll rot for the eternity we call life
I regret having been myself and doing so
Been the one who got off the hook
And leaving you to the pit filled with lions
But most of all
I regret not getting to tell you sorry
And however much I love you
Which has made me regret most of all...
I regret having loved you, and loivng you still

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

1 posted 2001-12-28 08:35 PM

I meant to say "Loving" in that last line.. not loiving

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-12-28 11:24 PM

don't worry i didn't even notice the loivng
thing i didn't even notice it until you
mentioned it.  I just can't spell so I over
look that kind of stuff out of habit.
When it comes to the poem, the feelings that
you get across show your regret and guilt.
You did that quite well when it comes to
getting your point across.  I am more of
a flow girl though and that didn't have as
much as i would like.  But you did great with
that style when it came to expression.
Good job.
And by the way I know what you mean...

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-12-29 12:14 PM

I feel this way sometimes too...but i think the wise thing to do is to not regret the things you've done..but the things that you have not...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2001-12-29 03:42 AM

Sounds like you regret al lot and it sucks but you will get through it.Very nice poem keep up the work.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-12-29 12:19 PM

This is a powerful poem, Trinity. Very well-expressed.

There is a note-pad overtop of your post where you can edit your post if you have a typo

Just for the future.

I enjoyed this piece, and I look forward to seeing more

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

prov1717
Member

since 2001-12-26

Posts 74
NE

6 posted 2001-12-30 11:27 PM

i agree....its powerful. dont' let the regrets you have bring you down, all you can do is learn and live better. keep it coming, i want to read more

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