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The Only Way I Knew
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The Only Way I Knew |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
To My Baby, I don't really know what happened, One day it was here, and the next it wasn't. I never wanted it to happen, I know that it near killed you, It would have been wonderful, We all would have been so happy, But now here you are, At the depths of dispair And I don't know what to do! I love you with all my heart And I know we will be fine, We just have to jump this hurdle And we will be fine. Im sorry that I'm hurting you, I know I show no fear, But I have to stay strong, Or I will lose control, I'm sorry my baby, I't the only way I know how! Guys, I wanted to post this up, it's more about my feelings than anything.I haven't been here for about 5 months and a lot more has happened.I spent 8 days in hospital after suffering a miscarriage a month ago.My boyfriend was wonderful, but he was devasted.He stood by me the whole time, and still does now, but we both have that little spot missing, that made us soo happy! I don't expect you to reply, I just wanted to show you girls that these guys do hurt too no matter how hard their shell. Thanks For your time peeps, Love Melster!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
First of all I am sorry to hear about your loss...Time is the only thing that heals pain...so I hope the healing process begins soon for you. The poem was excellent...very well structured and very good emotions expressed. Thanks for sharing and take care. ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I am so sorry to hear about your loss. I hope you are doing better. It is great to hear about how you guys stuck together, I think you will be able to jump that hurdle together. I agree guys have feelings and hurt too, I am glad you got the point across. Great job! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh, wow... this is heartbreaking. Melster, you are in my prayers. I'm so sorry that you've have a hard time lately. But, please email me whenever. My ear is always open  This is a beautiful poem, expressing some heavy issues. I hope you're alright, and I'm glad you're back Keep writing about it - it helps! And keep your head high. The sky is always more beautiful to look at than your feet. I hope I get to read more from you soon... so keep posting. --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hummm...I'm so sorry to hear of your loss. You have no idea of how saddened I am---especially to hear of a loss of this grandure. Time heals all pain, and there's no pain...like the pain of loss. You have my best wishes... And trust me, I know first hand...guys feel pain to. I know all too well... The trick is to know when to walk away---and TO KNOW WHEN TO RUN!!! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sad piece and i'm really sorry you had to go through all that.Beautiful piece though I loved it. Laurem "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
its been a really long time that ive seen you around here and icq. I hope you feel better. this poem was very good . Regina |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks for all your support guys and gals, I know it's been a while since I have been around, I hope that I can get more of a chance to pop in! Thanks again for your support, you are all wonderful! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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