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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
sleeps too far away and i can't seem to stop i can't stop thinking and i can't stop waiting i'm waiting for things to turn out right and for my life to change i'm waiting to be restored by the one i'm choosing to blame each day i fight my hunger and my longing to submit but if i give up my pride and let go of my dreams i'll feel like i just quit i know my thinking is wrong and maybe i'm just running away but i hurt so much and won't understand that all i need to do is stay |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
WOw... I really love this piece keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im really becoming quite a fan of your work...great job on the poem!!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It sounds like you're going through a very trying time. Well, I hope things start to look up. And don't wait for things to get better. Do something about it.  This is a well-written poem. You expressed yourself very nicely.I enjoyed this...  --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Short to the point, had a kewl flow to it that started in the middle and ended it well. My kind of poem, nicely done! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
One word: WOW! Great poem . . . |
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