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Baby_Angel123
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0 posted 2001-12-26 02:21 PM



                 You

All my life,
I have dreamed,
of someone like you.

Your not like most guys,
you are sweet, caring, understanding,
and most of all trustful.

I can talk to you about anything,
and I know you wont tell anyone,
or whenever have a problem,
I know I can always turn to you for help.

If I go to do something,
that might harm me in anyway,
you try to stop me.

I never had a guy,
that I could trust,
or someone who cares,
for me as much as you do.

Nor have I ever,
had someone who would,
do almost anything,
just to get me to stop doing something,
that might end up harming me.

No one that is,
but you,
and only you!


© Copyright 2001 Heather - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-26 03:10 PM


keep him!!!!!! they are indeed rare
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2 posted 2001-12-26 04:55 PM


Very rare!

I'm happy for you that you found this person in your life.  Everyone deserves him And especially one that seems as good as this!

I enjoyed this, and look forward to seeing more.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

prov1717
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3 posted 2001-12-26 05:20 PM


i'm glad that you have someone like this in your life, definitly a keeper, nice write as well.

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4 posted 2001-12-26 08:20 PM


Awwwwwwwwwww! Im so glad that you have someone so amazing in your life Never let this person go! Sweet poem

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Lil_Angel123
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since 2001-12-16
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5 posted 2001-12-26 09:35 PM


hey hun,
That poem must be about that special someone i think i know! Well i think that that is a really good poem! And show it to him if this is about him. Keep writing.
~Amanda~

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since 2001-11-30
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6 posted 2001-12-26 09:44 PM


I'm glad that you think of me that way my love.  I'll posting some soon hopefully about how I feel about you as well.  I'll see you soon my love!!!

_Me!

Shygirl82
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7 posted 2001-12-28 04:12 AM


You got yourself a good one..make sure to keep him...
Thanks for sharing
~Nikki~

Smile!!  You never know who may be falling in love with it...

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