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Belle19
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0 posted 2001-12-24 06:14 PM


What was I suppose to learn?
How am I suppose to deal?
Who am I suppose to turn too now?
My life and your life is all we had.
You were there for me and I was there for you.
My fears where your fears,
There was nothing we kept from each other.
We have always seen our ups and downs
But I never knew our lives can turn around so fast
Then please tell me what happened?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Someone please tell me how do I stop hurting from a best friendship that was great for 8 years.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

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1 posted 2001-12-24 06:56 PM


This was a great poem, I hope things are ok for you, losing a good or best friend can be very hard but sometimes all you can do is move on.

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2 posted 2001-12-24 07:00 PM


i know how it feels to loose a friend. i lost my friend because of college. i miss her terribly i told her everything and confided in her and now i haven't seen since october. i hope you will be ok. i don't know you but if you need to talk i am here.
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3 posted 2001-12-24 09:46 PM


the loss of a great friendship sucks and i know what you mean. If it makes you feel any better you wrote it out well.. sometimes thing change but there is always hope, never lose that.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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4 posted 2001-12-25 12:06 PM


Losing a friendship can be very difficult...but unfortunately these kinds of things happen in life and wat doesnt kill us will only make us stronger...

Your situation reminded me a lot of the quote

"your so much a part of me that if you leave me, i wont exist"

I thought that related quite a bit...::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Belle19
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5 posted 2001-12-25 04:29 PM


Thank you all. I know this is what happenes in life, but yet again as I say I never thought it was going to happen to me. I thank you all for the help and support you all are giving me. I hope you all had a wonderful Christmas. Thank you once again!
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6 posted 2001-12-26 12:35 PM


Belle, this is a very tough situation.  And unless I know the specs, I don't think I can help you much more than saying this: If the friendship is meant to be, then it will last.  Things will fix themselves, and everything will be hunky-dory again.  But if the friendships fades, then it fades.  There's not muhc you can do to help it.  Remember, friendships are a two-way thing.  If you're the only one that wants to make it work, then take my word on it, it won't work.
Good luck in this.  And hang in there.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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7 posted 2001-12-26 01:17 PM


keep your head up, friendships have tough times but the strong ones will always pull through.  good write and best of luck.
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