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TopGunLauren
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0 posted 2001-12-23 03:49 AM


You messed with the wrong person
And you threatened me and my friends
I never did anything to you
And now the war is about to begin

How could you key my car
And think I didn't know it was you
But it's ok lie all you want
Because your about to see what I can do

The cops have already been called
So soon you will have to pay
And your stories and excuses wont matter
Because they know the truth and wont listen to what you have to say

Even if the cops don't do anything
I have people who will so you better hide
You don't even what you have put me through
Even my dad cried

So now I'm taking matters into my own hands
Because what you did to me wasn't fair
Now reveange is all mine
And you will feel the pain I once had to bare

   Lauren

These girls key'd my car severely and I need a whole new paint job for my car.Then tonight they called my friends cell phone thretening me.And the cops really aren't doing anything about it yet so I'm doing what I need to do.

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


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Kaos
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1 posted 2001-12-23 03:53 AM


i know how ya feel...first day i drove my new civic to school some1 kicked a big dent in my passenger door and kicked my headlight(breaking the bumper too)... i didn't trust the cops too much either...so be careful how you handle it.  it'd be even worse if you got caught gettin em back...good poem too

p.s.
go get em!

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

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2 posted 2001-12-23 12:28 PM


this isn't a good idea. I understand your anger, but you had better be careful. Two wrongs don't make it right. It will only continue, and grow worse each time.Get evidence. Record the threats. Duh, get em where it really hurts, the pocket book. If you have proof, and can get a lawyer and sue their parents, how much trouble do you think they will be in then?! hmmmmmmmmmmmmm????? Use your brains here.....

[This message has been edited by SEA (12-23-2001 12:28 PM).]

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3 posted 2001-12-23 12:46 PM


want me to beat her up for you? grrr i can take em i'm tough!!
robin

repeat after me and rhonda : TITUS RULES THE EARTH!! ( i saw your sig rhon! lol)

vixengrl04
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4 posted 2001-12-23 03:22 PM


Eeeew ppl like that make me really mad!! I hope the cops do something about it, and either way I hope you enjoy your revenge!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Spine Grinder
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5 posted 2001-12-23 05:41 PM


wow, this wuz kewl, i liked it, but be careful, i'm not saying just stand there and cry about it, but just be careful.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

HopelessRomanticGuy
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6 posted 2001-12-23 09:09 PM


This was a Real good poem.  But I have to agree with Spine Grinder, if you are going to get revenge, I can't stop you, but do be careful, it can get dangerous.  None of us want to see anything worse happen to ya.
                                                                                -Rich

Don't Drink and Park!
Accidents may cause People!

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7 posted 2001-12-25 12:34 PM


U GO LAUREN!!!! I should give this girl a piece of my mind!! EVERYONE HOLD ME BACK!!!!

I hope this lil brat gets what she deserves...think revenge my child...revenge is sweet

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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