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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2001-12-23 03:09 AM

I watch you lay sleeping,
Chest rises    then falling.
Peaceful breaths    out and in,
Mind always thinking     where have you been?
My whole life   I’ve been waiting for you,
My heart jumped when I saw you   but unsure what to do.
A million things      I was too scared to say,
My first look in your eyes   I remember that day.
I remember the date  a slow dance   a kiss,
Holding you in my arms   heavenly bliss.
The days rolled by   found love in your smile,
You close to me   hoping you’d stay for a while.
Told you feelings from deep    my eyes two years dry,
But out snuck “ I love you”     and I wanted to cry.
The love we have    I will always treasure,
My heart and soul   are yours    forever.

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

1 posted 2001-12-23 04:09 AM

I know just how you're feeling!!!
Awesome write!! Thanks for sharing
Hallu!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-12-23 01:39 PM

You described such a wonderful feeling in your poem

How wonderful

...Beautifully written!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2001-12-23 03:13 PM

This was really pretty!! I love the feelings that you captured in this piece!! You did a really great job with this!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2001-12-23 06:20 PM

After I read it with the spacing... it flowed so unbelevably well. I lvoed this...*sigh*

Sweetness

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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