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Jenabou
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0 posted 2001-12-22 07:39 PM



Every day my heart beats for you
It's calling out you're name
Every day my heart bleeds for you
You cause it so much pain
Every day my heart longs for you
You're the one it does adore
Every day my heart blackens from you
You're making it grow sore
Every day my heart's door opens to you
You're the one who belongs inside
Every day my heart runs from you
It's trys so hard to hide
Every day my heart begs for you
and I have to tell it no
Every day my heart cries for you
Because you don't love me so

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

© Copyright 2001 Jenna-Nicole Boutilier - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-23 12:59 PM


Aww hun this is so sad....i really enjoyed the poem a lot though...it was beautifully written...amazing job

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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2 posted 2001-12-23 06:46 PM


This is a great poem and very beautifully written, thank you for sharing it with us

"No army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe"

vixengrl04
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3 posted 2001-12-23 08:24 PM


I really liked this!!!  It was so very sad, and something that I can totally relate to, unfortunately.  I hope your heart heals..

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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4 posted 2001-12-23 08:26 PM


Aww, I liked this poem, and I'm sorry to see you go through this.  I went through a simillar thing a couple months ago.

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5 posted 2001-12-24 01:42 PM


awwwww, that was extremly well written, but its so sad, makes me wanna cry. but hey, good job!
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