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Teen Poetry #5

Keeper of My Heart

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2001-12-22 07:33 PM

The life you have created  in my heart
is all I've ever dreamed of
You mended all my  broken pieces
and taught me how to  love
again
I've opened all my  doors to you
and left myself exposed
I'm diving into the shallow end
of something that may never grow
I know I shouldn't trust you
but yet I do somehow
My fate is not to me
it's completely in your hands now
The posistion of my heart's been filled
it's no longer up for rent
You're the one who owns it
and you're still trying out applicants
. . .

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

1 posted 2001-12-22 11:15 PM

This was a good poem. I much enjoyed it. I don't know why people haven't responded yet, they should have. It is quite a good write

Good luck with this person.

-Dreys

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-12-23 12:41 PM

This is so sad...im sorry that things arent going EXACTLY how you hoped they would right now but give it time...i hope everything works out and i hope you get what you want

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

3 posted 2001-12-23 06:12 AM

i know what it feels like to be on the other end of the poem... now i feel horrible...

excellent writing.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin to atone for.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-12-23 03:32 PM

This was sad...I hope everything works out for the best...

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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