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gymnast
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since 2001-11-18
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0 posted 2001-12-21 05:42 PM


I just want to say
I'm Sorry
Now I regret the day
That I ruined it all.

I know it was wrong to flirt
I'm Sorry
I never meant for you to hurt
Or for our friendship to break.

I didn't mean to argue
I'm Sorry
I wish we could start anew
I've mucked it up again

We said we'd still be friends
I'm Sorry
Now it looks like the end
'Cause I've made it all worse

We never seem to talk now
I'm Sorry
I've been such a cow
And I miss your conversation

I shouldn't have said those things
I'm Sorry
Because now we don't say anything
I didn't control my feelings for you

I wish I could take it bak
I'm sorry
I wish our friendship was on the track
But it's further off the rails

Life's too short you see
So I'm Sorry
Will you still be friends with me?
Even thought I've been so wrong.

Can we get it back to you and me
I'm Sorry!!
I must sound so pathetic
But your friendship means the world to me!

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1 posted 2001-12-21 11:45 PM


awww...hon, I hope it all works out, this is very touching, and if it were me, I'd forgive you!!! (((hugs)))
Jenabou
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2 posted 2001-12-22 07:53 PM


Great post
I hope it all works out for you.

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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3 posted 2001-12-23 12:26 PM


Awww cute
I'm sure it'll be for the best in the end

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-12-23 12:53 PM


Aww hun!! Im sorry that things are this way for you right now I hope that things will get better soon Nice poem and keep em coming!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

TopGunLauren
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5 posted 2001-12-23 02:48 AM


Yeah I also hoep everything works out for u it's a tough situation you are dealing with I'm sure.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


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6 posted 2002-01-04 04:07 PM


we all make mistakes, and you seem to be honestly sorry for what has happened.  Talk to this person about it.  Seems like to you, this person is worth it.  So, I'm hoping you do so.  thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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