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crazymin83
Junior Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 49
Mass

0 posted 2001-12-21 05:13 PM

I am a dreamer
I am a dreamer of no pain
I am a dreamer of someone excepting me as me, and not who they want me to be
I am a dreamer of tomorrow to see what to except in life
I am a dreamer of love, pain, and friendship

Just look past my wheelchair
Just look past my disability
Just look in my heart to see me
Just look at my smile that will tell you a lot about me

I am a dreamer of no more judging in the world
Or how pretty everyone has to look
I am a dreamer of friendship
I am a dreamer of seeing my dad one-day
To wake up in the morning to have everything back to normal

Just come see my world
Just come see threw my eyes
Just come see what I see
Just be me for one day and it will be hard

I am a dreamer of no pain
I am a dreamer of someone excepting me as me, and not who they want me to be
I am a dreamer of tomorrow to see what to except in life
I am a dreamer of love, pain, and friendship

Minna
December 21, 2001

"If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D"

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

1 posted 2001-12-22 11:19 AM

I like this format, and the repetition. Good idea for a write, and good job on it.

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2001-12-22 07:25 PM

I dream of similar things, and I sincerely hope that both of our dreams come true!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-12-23 12:36 PM

I enjoyed your use of this format...great poem

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-12-23 09:10 AM

Min, it is good to have dreams because ultimately, they do come true. Although some of them make take a while to happen, they do eventually.
The majority of this was pretty positive and that itself is commendable.

You should be happy with this piece. You're coming across as a wonderful writer with so much to give to the world. I hope things work out for you.

Please remember to reply to others work also.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

crazymin83
Junior Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 49
Mass

5 posted 2001-12-23 11:44 AM

I'm sorry for not repling, my computer that I use broke. So please don't be mad at me. My younger sister loved this poem she said where'd you come up with it? I said in my head. Bye Merry X-Mas & Happy New Year

"If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D"

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