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Zukene_Chic
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0 posted 2001-12-20 10:14 PM


Pink and green swirled.
But then, isnt it blue?
Or maybe yellow?
I see your eyes in mine
Everytime I look at a
Bubble

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1 posted 2001-12-21 06:18 AM


I liked this immensely, it's very creative and can't really be pidgeon holed, hope to read more of your work soon.

Zu

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2 posted 2001-12-21 11:29 AM


I just can't figure what the bubble symbolizes
I feel it's something special, but I need help
pls explain

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


Zukene_Chic
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3 posted 2001-12-21 06:28 PM


A bubble is the most celestial thing you'll find on this corrupt world- it symbolizes hope, beuaty, and perfection.
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