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Belle19 Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19California |
Tear's of sorrow, Broken Toy's, Skinned Knees, and shattered dreams I always knew Daddy would fix things. Breaking up, Loosing Friends, Loosing Family memebers too, I always knew Daddy would fix things. Scared, Running, Falling, Screaming, Shoots rang out, Death, I thought Daddy could always fix things? My brothers gone. Never to be seen again. Why can't my Daddy fix this? Daddy please fix this, I miss my brother, I never got to say I love you once last time. Please oh Please Daddy could you fix this one last thing? |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Oh, wow. I got tears to my eyes. A beautiful poem! Very nicely done. I'm sorry he can't fix this one last thing. We at pip are here if you ever need anyone to talk to...My email, and AIM: MtBikerGoneMad@aol.com A smile for you...  Sincerely, Titus |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is a great poem, I really like the repetition and the single word lines, thank you for sharing this with us Zu "No army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I believe this is something you can fix yourself As long as you keep him in your heart, he lives so, do so and keep him memory in you I'm sorry you have to go thru this please remain strong là où est mon amour? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow...great job..jus wow ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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