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Teen Poetry #5

if i did wrong

sad brown eyes
Junior Member

since 2001-12-14

Posts 19
Connecticut U.S

0 posted 2001-12-20 01:44 PM

If i do wrong, will your love stay strong?
If i say sorry will it mean anything, to you?
Do you still want to be with me?
Even when the trust is slim?
Will you eva forgive me?
Please tell me.
Sorry i know dont mean anyting.
But if i showed you would you forgive me?
Will our love be living endlessly?
Would you stillmarry me?
Please just forgive me.

renee

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2001-12-20 03:50 PM

whoa. It seems like you're really hurting over this....
it sounds almost like a plea....

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-12-21 02:11 AM

Sounds like a painful situation so I hope everything gets better for you.Great poem you expressed yourself well.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-12-21 02:03 PM

I hope he forgives you..your apology sounds sincere..i can see that but i hope he can too...i hope things work out ::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-12-24 12:39 PM

I just hope the best for you

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

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