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sad brown eyes
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0 posted 2001-12-20 01:10 PM


People tell me hes cheating.
How can he be so faithful to me?
But i know the truth.
Fithfulness dont come unless you know.
If you know you love someone then you know that they are faithful.
Bu thte doubts come in and your mind gets confused.
When my friends and family tell it to me.
I always fight but maybe i dont see.
Could he possibly be unfaithful to me?
Could that be?
But he loves me.
Why would he do that to me?
Dont you see.
Love is endlessly.

© Copyright 2001 Renee - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-21 11:04 AM


hmmmmmm, you seem to be in a bad situation
just don't close yourself from everyone else
they might have the truth to say
maybe this is the reaosn why they say love is blind
hope things work out for you
keep sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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2 posted 2001-12-23 07:10 PM


This is a awfully sad poem, I hope things get better for you soon.

Andrew

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Jenabou
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3 posted 2001-12-23 07:20 PM


I totaly know how this is.
I've been through it. Just remember if he is indeed unfaithful he's not worth it....He doesn't deserve you.
~Keep your face to the sun and you'll never see the shadow~
hang in there

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you.  Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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with you
4 posted 2001-12-23 08:09 PM


If people who love you are telling you,. people you love, then maybe you need to listen to them, and understand, it was hard for them to tell you at all....I once told a friend I dearly loved, that her boyfriend was cheating on her....she stopped talking to me for almost a year....then one day, we were sort of forced to talk, and she finally told me, she found out I was telling her the truth...I never asked her to say sorry. she never did, but we both knew.


Listen, even when it hurts. (((hugs))) he isn't worth it.

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
5 posted 2001-12-25 12:36 PM


Dont even get me started on the cheating topic..cant stand for it..wont stand for it...scared of it...omg...ahh i hate it soooo much!! it ruined my life and my trust and oooo it does so many bad things!!!

Phew..im sorry lol i jus needed to vent a lil...im glad you posted this...it was a good read and it let me get my inner anger out lol

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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6 posted 2001-12-25 03:29 AM


i liked this poem a lot! great work!
men grrrrrrrrrr!! how many times can we hate them? not enough!! but then again there are some sweet and caring guys!
robin

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7 posted 2001-12-26 12:10 PM


A very hard situation... *hugs*  Love sucks sometimes, huh?  I really enjoyed this poem.  It's well written.
Good luck with the situation.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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