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TopGunLauren
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0 posted 2001-12-20 01:12 AM


Through life I have made choices,
And had to sacrifice so much but why?
The memories cause me so much pain,
Which brings tears to my eyes.

I thought life would always be good,
But I was so wrong.
What happened to all the good friends I had,
Now most of them are gone.

No matter how much I try these days,
I can't be happy which makes me mad.
And even when I'm having a good day,
Something always seems to make me sad.

People tell me I should look forward to the future,
But I don't have anything to look forward too.
I live my life in the past,
So I don't know what I'm supposed to do.

My life really isn't that bad I know that,
But my life is still full of so much sorrow.
I just have to keep telling myself I'm ok,
And stop looking at yesterday and start looking forward to tomorrow.

Because of my choices I've sacrificed so much,
Some of which have made me almost go insain.
But I have to stay strong,
And hope one day I will have no more pain!

   Lauren


"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

[This message has been edited by TopGunLauren (12-20-2001 01:14 AM).]

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1 posted 2001-12-20 01:15 AM


Great poem! I like this....life is ever changing as are we....sounds like you have a great attitude about it
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2 posted 2001-12-21 06:48 AM


Great poem, I really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing this with us

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3 posted 2001-12-26 03:58 PM


excellent poem! sometimes its hard not to live in the past and want to go back and re-do so many things and make new choices....i hope to read more of your stuff soon, very nice job.
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4 posted 2001-12-26 08:23 PM


Your very right lauren you DO have to stay strong...and i believe things will get better for you...remember..all good things come in time...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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5 posted 2001-12-27 10:08 AM


Well-written poem, Lauren.  I like the message you portrayed.  You ideas were clearly expressed.  *hugs*     Stay strong.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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6 posted 2001-12-28 05:06 PM


Oh wow.... what a great piece of work! I loved it!

No matter how much I try these days,
I can't be happy which makes me mad.
And even when I'm having a good day,
Something always seems to make me sad.

Wow, I fee like this so much. It's so frustrating!

And the ending! I just lvoed this piece. I hope your vision clears and you can see a bright future for yourself. I pray and wish you good luck.

Sincerely,
Titus


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7 posted 2001-12-28 06:06 PM


This was really good...and I am glad you have a positive attitude on your future...
Thanks for sharing...
~Nikki~

Smile!!  You never know who may be falling in love with it...

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