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Teen Poetry #5

Crossed Paths

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2001-12-19 11:34 AM

I worked hard to gain your trust   just to be rejected,
Frequently ignoring me   what skill you have perfected.
I sit sometimes and wonder   why you do the things you do,
Can’t you see the pain in me   I feel lonely too.
Weekend after weekend alone in my own life,
Awakened by my screaming as you stabbed me with the knife.
Our paths were crossed at one time  I’m glad you were my friend,
But now I feel that our forked paths   will bring that to an end.
Once more I find an empty path   with naught but my blue pen,
And I stay tall though I fall   and hope our paths do cross again.

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

1 posted 2001-12-19 02:55 PM

I liked this one, i could related to what your saying here, good job

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Belle19
Junior Member

since 2001-12-17

Posts 19
California

2 posted 2001-12-19 09:53 PM

I like it a lot. I can really relate to it too. But the only best friend that I ever trusted in my life, back stabbed myself and my other best friend (we were all three best friends) but now its just the two of us. And my life feels incompleat without her. But our path's have slipt and I put it in Gods hands to bring us back together. Keep up the excellent work. I love it!!! :-)

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-12-20 12:33 PM

I really like this poem I can relate to it.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

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