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Ever flowing Passion |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
A question I have for you Have you ever met someone who makes you feel so good as if in heaven, on clouds making love under the meteor shower. Fall deep into the mystery of her dark eyes Always wondering what she is thinking trying to understand why she shows you so much love. And her smile you've never seen so much sunshine Whenever she smiles the world turns itself to a brighter better day. The sky turns blue along with my eyes that is true My day is complete even her voice makes me weak Her sexy smoothness intices my heart, my mind, my soul The more I think of her the more I adore her In one lifetime a women like this I could never ignore her. In conclusion I will tell you she is a Goddess with a body so fine she will put me in the hospital All love with great pain when she is into it she's not playing any games. All pleasure then we'd sit back and lounge almost forever. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Wow.. very well written piece it's full of emotion I love it.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
well i loved this piece! this is how i feel about my baby, he is the best and i still cant find the right dang words to tell him..not even I love you can give him a clue..jeez ....Handle with care... |
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