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AllThatGlitters4321
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since 2001-10-03
Posts 45


0 posted 2001-12-18 08:06 PM


Watching Over Me
Sitting here thinking about
the times we shared
Knowing you are gone
I'll have only
memories left
I never got to tell
you how much i cared
they said pull the plug
and just let him be

A special place you will
have in my heart
i gaze up at the sky
knowing your there
i wish you knew
losing you tore me apart
You were so precious to me
you were so dear

I know now that you are
watching over me
You taught me so much
you told me to be brave
Never would i of thought
i'd be standing before your grave

Im balling my eyes out
as i lean on one knee
but a comforting thought
goes through my body
because i know you
are watching over me.

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lone_poet707
Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer
1 posted 2001-12-18 09:35 PM


4 me, this poem really hits home- im goin thru the same thing. Anywho, great poem!
  -Joe

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
2 posted 2001-12-19 01:27 AM


I was going through the same thing you are going through over the summer and I'm still not over it.I hope everything gets better for you soon and begin to heal.But I love this poem and keep up the awsome work.
   Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
3 posted 2001-12-19 10:14 AM


oh, WoW, it seems like this poem describes how this past year went for me...seems like everymonth, I was losing someone(or something) else. I can really relate top this poem

If I held a star everytyme
he made me smile,I'd have the
evening sky in my palm, if
one was removed for every tear
he caused, I'd be emptyhanded.

AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45

4 posted 2001-12-19 06:07 PM


thank you all for replying....
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