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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world 
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A guardian angel sitting on her cloud Smiling broadly, looking straight down A child laying on a grassy field Staring up at the puffy white clouds The child giggles as he looks up He sees his angel and feels her love His mother looks on with smiling eyes Knowing above them his angel hides Looking up into the blue sky She slowly begins to wonder why She no longer sees her angel or even feels her loving touch In a moment she comes to realise that there must be more to this than she can see with her eyes She must instead look with her heart She lays back on the ground looking up Grins broadly at the big white clouds and quietly looks up with child like eyes a giggle, a grin, and then back again She sees her angel sitting high smiling broadly, she wonders why she never thought to look through the wonders of a childs eyes. If someone said, "Write a sentence about your life," I'd write "I want to go outside and play." |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
aww this is nice stace. very cute and sweet with a nice meaning behind it. great job dear. tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sweet and nice I liked it keep upt he awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
This was great, i really liked this a lot, great job here It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Stace, thank you for sharing this great and very sweet read with us all.  "No army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe" |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
thank you guys for replying If someone said, "Write a sentence about your life," I'd write "I want to go outside and play." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
HOLY MOLY!!! That was great, I'm totally speechless *standing ovation* là où est mon amour? |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked how you wrote this, Stace...pure sweetness! lol...nice seeing you as well around the forums...i enjoyed the poem, thanks for sharing. Hey...#25437 |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Stace-- This was such a cute poem!!!!! Touching to the heart..sweet and innocent all in one..Beautiful poem. It really did put a smile on my face...so with that, thank you for sharing! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very well written poem, Stace! I'm impressed. You've progressed so much as a poet. It's amazing! Wonderful work. It amazes me the innocence children have. The innocence I've always wished I could have back for one day. Wonderful work. I enjoyed this, as always. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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