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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2001-12-18 10:06 AM


I sit here and wonder
what you are doing
while I sit here in class
and you are home
working from a computer.

It gets really hard sometimes
but I know I can go on
with you in my heart,
is how I go on each day
your love means so much to me.

I sometimes wish you wernt homeschooled
that I could see you in school,
and hug you when I am down
when I am sad,
I can turn to you.

But, I dont think you are comming back
until the next morning
when I can hold you
like it was yesterday
and we never said goodbye.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My boyfriend Jeffy is homeschooled. Somedays, his going home hurts me so much that I can only cry and think of him to get comfort. Its been three months..and still going strong

"Water Over Matter"

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1 posted 2001-12-18 10:07 AM


Aww hun this is so sad...but i firmly believe everything happens for a reason. Now that he's not by you whenever you need him..it makes the time you do spend all that much more valuable   Nicely done..i think you expressed yourself nicely!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
2 posted 2001-12-18 05:37 PM


Very sad piece but I like it a lot keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


Belle19
Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19
California
3 posted 2001-12-18 07:25 PM


Very good I liked it, everything will be okay... Just stay strong and everything will be okay!! Great poem.. Keep up the good work!
LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 384
IL
4 posted 2001-12-19 03:07 PM


This was sad, but very good. nice job

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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