Teen Poetry #5 |
Wonder |
Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I sit here and wonder what you are doing while I sit here in class and you are home working from a computer. It gets really hard sometimes but I know I can go on with you in my heart, is how I go on each day your love means so much to me. I sometimes wish you wernt homeschooled that I could see you in school, and hug you when I am down when I am sad, I can turn to you. But, I dont think you are comming back until the next morning when I can hold you like it was yesterday and we never said goodbye. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My boyfriend Jeffy is homeschooled. Somedays, his going home hurts me so much that I can only cry and think of him to get comfort. Its been three months..and still going strong "Water Over Matter" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww hun this is so sad...but i firmly believe everything happens for a reason. Now that he's not by you whenever you need him..it makes the time you do spend all that much more valuable Nicely done..i think you expressed yourself nicely! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sad piece but I like it a lot keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Belle19 Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19California |
Very good I liked it, everything will be okay... Just stay strong and everything will be okay!! Great poem.. Keep up the good work! |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
This was sad, but very good. nice job It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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