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crazymin83
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since 2001-09-16
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0 posted 2001-12-18 12:19 PM


I didn’t fall for you
You fell for me
Your eyes would always hit mine
Your touch would make me tingle
Every time I saw you I wanted you
But knew deep inside wanted me too
I was scared of you
You were trying to help me face my fears
While I wanted to forget them
You told me ”only you can ruin them
So you better face them now or never”
I want to thank you for that
We were two different people until
You asked me out
I love you, and I don’t want to lose you
Like I lost my dad
You’re always there to give me a hug
Or pick me up when I need it
I learned to trust you
I learned to love you
You learned how to return that love
That I give you everyday, every moment I live
You came in my life
Made everything a little better
And I want to thank you
So much
Minna
December 17, 2001


if you wanna know how we got together you can email me or instant message me CrazyAng02


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TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
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1 posted 2001-12-18 01:43 AM


Oh very sweet poem your lucky to have someone beautiful poem.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


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2 posted 2001-12-18 10:00 AM


Aww what a cute poem...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
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3 posted 2001-12-18 10:27 PM


MINNA!! This is so incredibly sweet. Yup, you've fallen head over heels for this guy. Judging from what you've told me and this piece, he sounds like pure gold.

I'm happy that you're happy.

Take care of yourself and thanks a lot for posting.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

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4 posted 2001-12-24 06:03 PM


your poems are SO hearfelt and this one was extremly sweet...touching, indeed...im TRULY glad for you, Minna. May it last...

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