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Belle19
Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19
California

0 posted 2001-12-17 08:41 PM


What is a friendship?
Is that what you and I had?
I don't even know if it was true.
Life was a joy a never ending thrill,
Each day would bring a new adventure
It had brought so many happy times, memorable times,
And it also brought around our hard times.
But now after all the tears, fears, memories..
I'm sad to say even a great friendship must come to an end.
I struggled to hold on to what we once had,
But I realize I can't hold on to the past
But have to live for today and what's to come..
So in the end you went your way and pushed me out.
The friendship we once had,
Will now and never be at all.
Now I said my last goodbye
I cried my last tear,
To send every last hope of energy to our friendship.
I'm sick and tired of doing,
But I know now that this isn't the real you
But you will never know that
Until you realize it on your own..
But when you doI won't be their..
You lost a great friend,
That you'll never find again.
So I say my last goodbye.
I cried my last tear
And I'm done with a friendship that
Hasn't been..
Good Bye

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TopGunLauren
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
1 posted 2001-12-17 08:48 PM


This is an awsome piece especially for being your first on here I really love it.ALl my poems lately for the most part have been on my best friend and how our friendship is growing apart so I can totally realte.Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


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Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
2 posted 2001-12-18 11:32 AM


Welcome Welcome Welcome

Welcome to Passions for Poetry
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Happy sharing and reading too
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I enjoyed you poem a lot
I believe you have the talent so keep it up
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
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AllThatGlitters4321
Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45

3 posted 2001-12-18 08:10 PM


That was so good....I am going through a problem with my best friend right now...This poem was so good Keep Up The Work!!!!
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