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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169
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If we had (never) never (imagine) met. (can't) (Life would be .) -------- -Derek |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
omi god I love this i totally dig it its so COOL very creative!!!! [This post has been created by Alyssa, be joyous she has graced you with her pressence!!!] |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
very creative. I like it  For now, all I can do is dream. |
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[Ice Box] Junior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 21Canada |
*Sigh* Romance is in the air tonight... *Jingle jingle* This is a lovely piece! Like everyone before me said, it's very creative. Almost abstract...just like love. Haha, like I would know to, eh? *Jingle* I really liked the space you left at the very end. Basically, you said nothing without really saying anything...*Thinks* That was full of coolness. Your title is very appropriate. It caught my eye when I was skimming (I tried to stop, but I just couldn't...pain. Utter...pain...) *Ahem* Anyways... I'm fine now. But thank you for a really wonderful poem! 'Tis the season to be in love! Cheers and many jingles to you! [Ice Box] Purity. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Wow...awsome I like it it's different keep up the great work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very interesting.....hmmmmmmmmmm là où est mon amour? |
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