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sad brown eyes
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since 2001-12-14
Posts 19
Connecticut U.S

0 posted 2001-12-17 09:59 AM


He told me i needed a new man, someone who will care.
Asked where i could find one and he says, he's standing right here.
Told him i got hurt and i dont want the same thing happening again.
He promised and told me things that now i dont understand.
He left me cold and bitter just like a winter.
Left me for someone who has hurt him again and again.
Told me she deserved a second chance while i feel dead.
   Is it me?
Something i said?
Every time the same thing happens again and again.


renee

[This message has been edited by sad brown eyes (edited 12-17-2001).]

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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2001-12-17 10:10 AM


*huggies*

You know, blaming yourself isn't the way to go. Obviously this guy doesn't understand you as a person because if he did, he wouldn't have left.

Try not to worry too much about it, as tough as that may be. The sun will continue to rise and fall and each day brings us new surprises. Remember this and things will look up.  

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"I don't think we should have to face all of our fears in one life." - Kevin, Seachange

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
2 posted 2001-12-17 09:25 PM


You really shouldn't blame yourself she is right but anyway very well written poem I liked it.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


Acies
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Twilight Zone
3 posted 2001-12-21 01:57 PM


I just hate it when this happens
The question is, will you give him the 2nd chance
Specially when this other person breaks his heart again
I hope you learn from the past
It's the past that makes us take a step into the future
remember that
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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