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0 posted 2001-12-17 07:57 AM


"Good morning sunshine",
"As usual, this is the best its gonna get".
Another morning spent looking in a mirror,
One more day to regret.
Last night was frustrating,
But what else should I expect?
My life in its breath-taking misery,
I’ve eventually grew to accept.
I don’t have any desire,
To see this day come to its end.
Because my only nightmare,
Is to have to do this tomorrow all over again.
But as expected,
Day turns into night and night turns to day.
And I wake up with the sun on my face,
Feeling the same exact way.


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1 posted 2001-12-17 08:22 AM


Michelle, such feelings are never the best. I do know how you feel though (not what you probably wanted to hear  ). But remember, nothing stays the same forever so there is only so far down you can go before you have to start climbing.  

Take care of yourself and thanks for posting.

~AF~

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2 posted 2001-12-17 08:53 PM


It sucks having those feeling especially everyday.But again I love this poem just like every other poem you have ever posted.And if you ever need someone to talk to I'm here.SO I hope everything gets better for you soon.
  Lauren

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3 posted 2001-12-18 10:09 AM


Thank you both for replying  

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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4 posted 2001-12-20 03:28 PM


This is horrible to feel this way, but... This poem was GREAT!!! Really like it alot. Hope things go better but it made for a excellent poem.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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5 posted 2001-12-21 01:51 PM


Thanks hun

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6 posted 2001-12-21 02:30 PM


Michelle ---- we all need to learn to make the best of what we are or have.  I guess it's a lengthy process, but stay strong and hang in there.  Thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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7 posted 2001-12-24 07:36 PM


Sigh* i can relate to this fully, Michele. you are strong from what i've seen so far...this piece was hard for me to read as much as it was probably hard for you to write..."And I wake up with the sun on my face,
Feeling the same exact way." thats so realistic in how someone feels even when its a time to start all over you still feel the past living in the present. take care, buddy.

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