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Teen Poetry #5

Bubble

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

0 posted 2001-12-16 09:55 PM

For Craig

Surrounded by darkness,
Completely alone with the company of stars,
I could hear not the sound of the water under us-
Not the sound of the wind rushing around us-
Only the sound of your breath, your words,
Encased in a bubble,
A euphoric world of our own;
Reaching from your arms to mine,
Enclosing us in a peaceful haven
Where reality ceased to exist,
The world was still and we were spinning
Oblivious to everything but you and I,
The real world stopped frozen in time,
My cold body warmed by the heat inside you,
The impact of your actions, your passion
Eclipsed all possible outside interferences;
That place, that bubble was solely ours
Take me to that world with you

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-12-18 01:24 PM

very beautifully said Bela
I loved each owrh
Hoping the best for you
happy holidays

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-12-21 11:07 AM

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-12-21 02:03 PM

BEAUTIFUL POEM !!!!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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