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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2001-12-16 08:19 PM


Midnight confessions
Moonlit obessions
Angles mourn
As I lie here crying upon the floor
They try to reach out
And touch my misguided soul
But I'd much rather be alone
Bleeding with this unbearable pain
Each time I cry out your name
How stupid
Could I have been
To indulge in such a delicious sin
My heart knows
It all will be over within a blink of an eye
And I'll be sitting all alone
Still shrouded by your enchantment
As the angels try to unlodge
Each piercing sword
Deep within my mind, body, spirit, soul and mind
I need to let go
Of all the kisses
And sweet caresses
You bestowed upon me
During my time of uncertainity
This is surely a dark hour indeed
For now I'm forever upon my knees
Pleading for guidance
Before I spiral deeper with this dark abyss
And before I lose myself within your kiss..


© Copyright 2001 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

1 posted 2001-12-16 11:28 PM


Oh my dear, I love this poem but the anguish behind it makes me very sad. This poem is beautiful, I love the imagery behind it. Thank you so much for letting me read this.

Crystal

"I'll be your crying shoulder, I'll be the greatest fan of your life."
"You don't love her because she's beautiful. She's beautiful because you love

Acies
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2 posted 2001-12-21 11:21 AM


I believe I haven't seen a happy poem from you
I hope to see one soon, and that'll tell me things have changed around
Hoping for you happiness

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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