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jaded
Junior Member

since 2001-07-24

Posts 20

0 posted 2001-12-16 06:33 PM

I'm sorry this isnt anything amazing, but it was how I felt at the time, and I just wanted to see what anyone felt about it,

thanks!

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ForgiveMe
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Sorry, Can be hard to say
I'd hate to see things end this way
Now every word I speak is true
I beg forgiveness off of you

Sorry, I'll say it time and time
You gifted me, this life of mine
Just tell me what I have to do
My life is worthless without you

The brightest star in the whole galaxy
You gave me the gift of shining on me
From the oceans below and the heavens above
I promise you all of my undying love

If you will forgive me, I promise you this
From the depth of my heart, with the gentlest kiss
I give you my heart, please be gentle
I'll love you, more than any one else

MindlessPoet
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

1 posted 2001-12-16 06:44 PM

how could someone not forgive you after that? hehe. That was a beautiful poem, and it flowed nicely

For now, all I can do is dream.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2001-12-17 12:09 PM

So incredibly sweet. I liked it much!!!

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

3 posted 2001-12-18 05:35 PM

i like i like!

....Handle with care...

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2001-12-18 05:44 PM

Whoever you wrote this too should forgive you it's a beautiful piece I loved it.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

5 posted 2001-12-19 02:48 PM

Wow this was very good, i liked it a lot

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2001-12-19 04:26 PM

Very nicely done. Quite sweet.

Titus

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-12-24 06:06 PM

I felt the somewhat desperation of "needing" and probably what it might of felt like writing...though it was sweet. and definitly deserves forgiveness.

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You in there?
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xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-12-25 12:31 PM

I hope they forgive you!!!!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-12-26 11:28 AM

Sometimes those three words: "I forgive you" is the only thing we need to hear to continue with life again. Very nicely written, and more than deserving of that forgiveness. *hugs* Good luck.
Well done.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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