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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Life's a {edited} and then you die before that you cry some people get high but either way you die the pain stops the fear stops the blood no longer drops but either way you lose you die "It is better to have loved and lost than to have never have loved at all" ...but the pain of both is equally unbearable... [This message has been edited by acire (12-21-2001 02:38 PM).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hmm... I got a ton of different perceptions from this piece.. which I love. Love very much. It's very thought provoking. I got so much out of it. Thank you for posting it. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. jaimespoetry.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
tony, this is such a sad...disturbing little piece of poetry. however, it is still good, i don't think there is any of your poems i haven't liked. hopefully the day you stop writing 'em is the day penguins ice skate in hell...hah! lol. i'm so easily amused...annnnnyyywayz. bye bye!!! be happy, and most of all continue to make me laugh. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You should try to be more possitive in your outlook in life. Life can be satisfying and gratifying là où est mon amour? |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yes and no. I think like that way of perseptive, BUT thats what dreams are for...Take care. Hey...#25437 |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
yes we are going to die, but why not make the best of your time? Dream, hope, think, feel, at least then your time is worth something in the end. This was set up well and written well. Good job. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I definately have a lot of thoughts on this subject...thought this poem was very good and i agree to a lot of it actually but i think that theres better things to do with your time then waiting to die dont u agree? Dark poem..i liked it! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I agree with Acire. I think you just need to have a positive outlook on things. If you're always making things out to be wonderful, then your life will be also. God bless. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Although it's hard to make something out of nothing, there is always a crack in the wall. Just look for it and make it bigger. Eventually, some sort of light will have to come through for you. Thanks for sharing this piece, Tony. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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