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crazymin83
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since 2001-09-16
Posts 49
Mass

0 posted 2001-12-14 06:18 PM



Have you ever thought how I think?
How I feel about life?
Or how I want to beat my battle of my disability

Have you ever thought how I walk?
With braces and a walker
And the rest of the world doesn’t have to

Have you ever wanted something but you couldn’t get it?
Well sometimes you don’t understand how I want things
I want to fill my dreams you want to ruin my dreams

Have you ever thought how frustrating my life is?
It can be happy, it can be sad
I can listen to music, I can do many things

But have you ever thought how I think?
How I feel about life
Or how I want to beat my battle of my disability

Minna
December 14, 2001


© Copyright 2001 crazymin83 - All Rights Reserved
keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
1 posted 2001-12-15 01:16 AM


THis is a good poem. Pretty sad though. Hope every thing gets better.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
2 posted 2001-12-15 03:25 AM


Very sad poem but very well written I like it a lot. Keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
3 posted 2001-12-15 01:46 PM


Min! where you been chick?? I havent talked to you forever. Great post as usual   Take care of yourself** Kiley

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Acies
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-12-21 03:00 PM


Minna --- Be strong ok.  No negative thoughts anymore ok?  Always, I mean always be strong. *hugs*

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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