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baby0508
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0 posted 2001-12-14 01:11 PM


I'm re-posting this because there are some people that never got the chance to read it and I know that some of you will enjoy it.

Mind Games

Mess with my head a little more
because the pain you'll never see
Continue to rip my heart in shreds
and cause me misery.

Watch every tear fall off my face
and act like your confused.
Pretend that you can't see
How my kindness you've abused.

Play with my emotions like their nothing
Mess with them constantly
Pretend that they don't exhist
Continue hurting me.

Do you like it when I cry
When there's no smile upon my face?
Does it please you just to know
That a tear now takes its place?

Do you love to cause me pain?
And play with my fraigle heart?
How about you break it all you'd like,
Just rip it all apart.

You're gonna wish you never did this
Never played this little game
Cause now it's turned upon you,
And you're the one to blame.

Now I've turned your game around,
So this is what you do.
And now your heartless mind games,
Are only hurting YOU!!


© Copyright 2001 Heather - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-14 03:28 PM


Wow. I liked it. The anger and hurt come through quite clearly. Good write...

Also, the short lines, and quick fire rythym of them make it more powerful. Again, nice work.  

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2 posted 2001-12-21 02:35 PM


Just let his past and current actions hurt himself
never turn around and do it to him yourself
that's just going down to his level
that's the last thing you wanna do
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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3 posted 2001-12-21 04:17 PM


I liked this alot, i hope to see lots more like this, i enjoyed it.
Thanks for posting

....Handle with care...

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-12-23 01:05 AM


Great poem!! It had a ton of feeling and emotion in it!!! Thanks for sharing!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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5 posted 2001-12-23 03:56 AM


Ouch...but good idea...people always get what they give, and they usually deserve it.  Well written poem, i really liked the way you wrote it and the words you chose to use...

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

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