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Completely Incomplete
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Completely Incomplete |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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This is another short one I wrote last night. COMPLETELY INCOMPLETE Everything seems perfect Life appears so great The truth is, however, That I need you in my life You're my one true love Knowing I can't have you Leaves me completely incomplete - Cody - |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I don't like this one as much as the others but the message is still clear. It sucks to know you love someone that you can't have. *bites love on the leg* Keep your head up though. Like the saying goes, "There are plenty of fish in the sea"  ~AF~ Caution: Filling is hot. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This reminds me of sisqo's song "incomplete" I hope you find happiness keep your head up là où est mon amour? |
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Roberta Little Junior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 42beloit wi usa |
that's deep, even though it doesn't seem like it. nice writing. |
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