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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-12-10 10:26 PM

Casting smiles aside,
Thinking life is a bluff,
She just laughs when it hurts,
When it pains her to love.

She’s as light as the breeze,
Lifting souls when she flirts
And it pains her to love
And she laughs when it hurts.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-12-10 10:48 PM

I'm gonna have to keep this one

It's perfect

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-12-11 12:44 PM

Just beautiful, Andrey. It's elegant in it's simplicity. I'm going to keep this one too. I know a person this would fit perfectly.

Well done. Another great piece.

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-12-11 12:59 PM

quite deep...i like your expression and its nice to see them in the forums again...enjoyed fully, wonderful piece.

Hey...#25437
What!
You in there?
Yea, im in here.
ok

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-12-21 12:28 PM

Lizzy put it the right way..."elegance in simplicity"
You've always been amazing
I've seen a decline in your sharing though
I hope you change your mind and do share more
Thanks for the wonderful and beautiful read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-12-21 01:36 PM

Havent seen you around here in a while!!! Its great to see you again!! Short and sweet poem...wondderful job and i hope to continue to see more of your poems!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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