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Ree Ree
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0 posted 2001-12-10 07:05 PM


Just wanna call him
Tell him all the stupid things he's done.
Tell him how he's hurt me again.
I wish I could just tell him I hate him.

Just wanna call him
Tell him how much he means to me.
Tell him how he makes me feel.
I wish I could just tell him I love him.

This is stupid, it's not fair.
It's not getting us anywhere.
I'm scared that he won't love me,
I just want him loving me again.

Can't wait to see him
Ask him why he's doing this to me.
Ask him why he broke my heart again.
I wish I could just ask him all these things.

Can't wait to see him
Just because I still miss him so much.
Cause I can smell him on my jacket.
I wish I could just hold him once again.

I'm not sure what i'm thinking,
And i'm thinking things aren't right,
So does that mean i'm not sure if things are right?


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1 posted 2001-12-10 10:32 PM


It means you are confused   and that's ok sometimes....it will work out I'm sure   best of luck to you though (((hugs)))
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2 posted 2001-12-11 09:38 AM


Ugh, I know how you feel. Wait this one out. Don't do anything too rash that you'll regret in the morning.

Take care and thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2001-12-11 09:40 AM


you do sound confused all right!

well written...

Regards,
sudhir

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4 posted 2001-12-21 01:31 PM


the confusion of it all
just settle down and think what's best for you
don't let your heart decide, let your mind do it
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
5 posted 2001-12-21 01:32 PM


I understand exactly how you feel...Do whatever you think you should do..i know that hearts can pull a person into a million different directions...it sux in that way...Great poem Keep em comin!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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