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Teen Poetry #5

At last my love

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-12-10 03:01 PM

At last my love you have left,
At last my love I dont feel your breath,
At last my love you are gone,
At last my love It doesnt feel wrong,
At last my love Im happy without you,
At last my love Im by myself,
At last my love Im not alone,
At last my love Ive got another,
At last my love She's much better,
At last my love Your not my love!

Hey guys

like it? hope so even tho the part that ive gotten another is not true i thought it would sound nice.

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-12-10 05:44 PM

Doesnt it feel good to get over someone...to be on your own...INDEPENDENT!!!!!!!! Hehehehe...wow got a lil too excited there...

sorry!! Nicely done..Good job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-12-11 12:51 PM

Hura for you, Branden!!! Go that strength!! I did find the repetition a little too much though. But hey, the message is loud and clear and that is what matters! It's good to see you taking a stand for yourself.

Thanks for sharing, buddy.

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

[This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 12-11-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-12-21 12:34 PM

I hope this is not being sour grapes

Just wishing you all the happiness though
Keep sharing Branden

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

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