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sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
Loving You Loving you has to be the hardest thing I’ve ever done But then again I haven’t done allot You mean more to me then words will say and when I look at you, you look the other way You say you love but is it true? I’m beginning to wonder why I ever loved you. I know you’re the best, the best for me But when I see you I see her in your eyes Not one of my friends or even someone I know but it’s another female she’s not a friend or foe. I used to dream about the day that we would live together. Now, I know that wont ever happen. I’ll love you though no madder what no madder what comes to pass or who you’ll call your next “love” I’ll love you till the day I die I hope that’s soon and I don’t know why Don't be sad because it's over smile because it happened! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
don't wish for your young life to be over because of this young man. There will be many many more on your journey through life. The idea is to learn from each one, so when the man of your dreams stands before you, you'll recognize him  big hugs to you |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
"Sometimes its better to be alone, no one can hurt you that way" I love that quote cause its so true. You have your own feelings and no one could change that just stay strong. No guy is worth wanting to die over. Or even to have feelings like that. "I could fill a thousand pages telling you how I felt & still you wouldnt understand, So now I leave without a sound except my heart shattering ans it |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Not bad! It's a good start for pip. I have to agree though, no man is worth wanting to die for, not even me! AHAHAHAHA.... Sorry. This could use some revising, but otherwise, like I said, not bad. Keep 'em coming...Sincerely, Titus |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Oh, and good rhyming! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Ditto to Sea on this one. You have so much more to look forward to... so many more guys to enter your life, and sweep you off your feet. You just wait You'll look back and say "what was I thinking?" *hugs*Well done. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow cassi, this wuz great....i dont mean be a villan  we're all in this 2gether babes and always remember ~no man or woman is worth crying 4, and the ones that r, wont make u cry~luv u gurl  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Love is definately a very difficult thing in my opinion..you gotta learn the rules of the game and so on...nice job on this..i think you expressed yourself nicely ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
One of these days you'll find your true prince. Don't be in such a hurry though If you see someone else in his eyes, then he is not for you Don't force things at this point, you are still young He'll come one day and sweep you off your feet Keep your head up là où est mon amour? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Listen to Acire and Walt Disney..."Some day your prince will come." Just don't shut the door on him cause you're too busy dwelling on an untrue love. Nice work. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
What pain....it's doesn't sound too good. All the advice given here is excellent and you should listen to these people. Good luck with everything and thanks for sharing. ~AF~ Caution: Filling is hot. |
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crunchiL365 New Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 3 |
Your poem was really deep. Please don't wish your life away on account of some young man that broke your heart, they'll be plenty more men and if the Lord is willing-which He probably is-you'll love another and get married and have beautiful children. Think of this as a learning experiance, next time you are in a relationship with someone you love very much, you'll know what to do and what not to do, until then, keep your head above ground! |
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