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luvnkris
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0 posted 2001-12-09 07:41 AM


Adam…

Even from when I first saw you
At the beginning of the year
I found myself being unable
To turn around and steer clear

There’s something about you Adam
Something that I can’t explain
Maybe it’s a connection we have inside
I want to be with you sun or rain

Even though we both have partners
My mind won’t stop these thoughts
I keep thinking of us together
And hoping I don’t get caught

I replay that moment we kissed
Over and over again in my head
Something between us clicked that day
Even though nothing much was said

Adam, I know you know how I feel
And I wrote this poem for you
Please think about what you want
Because I know you like me too


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*


[This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 12-09-2001).]

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anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-12-10 08:40 AM


Ooo Jo, I hope this doesn't end in disaster for either of you.
If you grab him, good for you. I went through this too and it ruined my life...lol. Sorry, not very encouraging.  

Good luck and thanks for sharing.  

~AF~

"When I eat I feel. It is better if I don't feel, I am too afraid." - Ellen West

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2 posted 2001-12-10 10:08 AM


Its nice to see you posting..i havent seen you around here in a while.. Nicely written poem..keep em comin!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2001-12-10 11:03 AM


Very sweet!  It's awesome that you found this person.  
well done on the poem.  I certainly enjoyed it.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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4 posted 2001-12-13 03:49 PM


Glad someone's loving their life  
Glad to see you posting again too
More power to you and pls keep sharing
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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5 posted 2001-12-13 03:51 PM


UH OH be careful. If it works out then wooo hoooo kudos... but be careful not to hurt anyone.   Nice to see you posting.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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