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Wheelsgirl
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0 posted 2001-12-08 05:21 PM


Is It My Friends, My Mind, Or Both

I don’t believe this... I feel like I’m being betrayed by someone I love
and care about. To betray someone is so wrong, so very hurtful.
I hate it, I really hate it!
Why do I always have to believe every word someone says to me?

As I look upon this day I think to myself “Gee what am I going to do,
how can I trust anymore?

I want friends that won’t lie and if that’s not possible then I don’t want
any friends at all! I know I lie to them sometimes, but I don’t as much
as they do it to me. Sometimes they all just (edited by Moderator)suck!

Why does my mind always play games with me, is it that my mind just
likes to torture me? If my mind isn’t playing games with me then is
someone playing with my mind?

And if all these elements are leading me to what might happen to me in
the future then I don’t want any part of it!

Now wait a minute is it my friends, my mind, or both?

[This message has been edited by Alyssa (edited 12-09-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-08 06:41 PM


Wheels,
As a DM i guess i have to tell you that you really shouldnt put ***asterisk*** in place of a word, you can still tell what it was meant to say and this is a family site and its against the PIP guidelines..i think an edit is needed..thanks a bunch =)
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HopelessRomanticGuy
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2 posted 2001-12-08 06:59 PM


I know the feeling.......  Trust me.  Betreyal is painful.  Since I'm not a DM I won't say anything about the **asterisk**.....wait.... I just said something, didn't I....  Darn.  I'm a walking, talking contrediction...... Who can't spell.  Man, I've been gone for too long to forget my maners, Welcome to Passions!
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3 posted 2001-12-21 10:27 AM


just remember, we all have our own mistakes
talk to them about it
communication is the best answer ya know
that's part of being friends too
thanks for the share

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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4 posted 2001-12-21 01:57 PM


Who knows what it is? I think only YOU can decide that...i definately do think that if everyone takes everything people say to such an extent as to analyze every single word that people will undoubtedly be hurt 24/7...just try and take things in a generalized way and stop putting so much meaning behind it..sometimes a word is JUST a word...hopefully you'll feel better heres a big hug...::BIG HUG!!!:: LoL

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Wheelsgirl
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5 posted 2001-12-23 03:22 PM


Sorry about that it won't happen again... I must have not check it well enough on my computer before I posted it. I don't usually write like this so I'm sure you won't see it anymore.

Wheelsgirl

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