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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2001-12-07 08:20 PM


Because of You

My life was a disaster.
I was always grounded,
and never got along with anyone.
There wasn't a day,
when I wasn’t fighting with my mother.

I would go out,
and do as I pleased.
I didn't care about anything,
or anyone.

Until I met you.
You turned my life around.
You opened my eyes,
and made me see,
that there’s more to life.

Because of you,
my life is different,
I am so much happier.
I’m hardly ever grounded,
and don’t fight with my mother as much.

Without you in my life ,
who knows where I would be.
But the one thing I do know,
is that i'm greatful,
to have a friend like you.

© Copyright 2001 Heather - All Rights Reserved
Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419

1 posted 2001-12-07 11:42 PM


It's a perfect describtion of my sister,well fun aside...I think it's great you found somone, that makes you feel that way...
Wish lots of happiness. Thanks for sharing...

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Twilight Zone
2 posted 2001-12-11 06:10 PM


I'm glad you've found someone who's made you and your life happier
These are the type of people that are keepers
more power to you and this person
thanks for the wonderful read
keep it up

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
3 posted 2001-12-12 01:25 AM


*claps excitedly*

Good for you! People like this are always great assets to our existences.

Keep smiling and thanks for sharing this positive piece.  

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-12-12 05:16 PM


Thank god for those friends out there that can help us in our life...they r very important..im glad this person helped you  

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

lone_poet707
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since 2001-11-17
Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer
5 posted 2001-12-12 09:34 PM


Im so happy that u found such a special person! Anywho, great piece- hope to read more from ya!
  -Joe  

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