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sweetlilangel
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0 posted 2001-12-07 06:22 AM


Slipping away
I feel things changing as time goes on
we are not the same we’re not like one.
We used to know everything about each other
now there is this big void between you and me.
I think the void has a name but I will not tell who.
I know that you will fill it soon.
Why do we have to slip away???
I wrote this not to long ago when i thought that a friend of mine was trying to take my boyfriend now i know she isn't and i still love her to death~Cassi

© Copyright 2001 Cassi - All Rights Reserved
Spine Grinder
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1 posted 2001-12-07 06:43 AM


thanks gurl! this wuz a awesum write, and u know how much i care!
byes

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2001-12-07 12:44 PM


This reads more as prose to me but it's good to see the two of you are such good mates.  

~AF~

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3 posted 2001-12-12 05:44 PM


Even though you're both real friends, you still have to go thruy trying times as others do.  Being able to go thru this only makes you better friends.  Hope you solve your differences.  Thanks for sharing.

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
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4 posted 2001-12-12 06:34 PM


Nice write I'm glad everything worked out for you.
  Lauren

HopelessRomanticGuy
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5 posted 2001-12-12 07:19 PM


I liked this poem, sounds like what my girlfriend thought was happening a whie ago.  It is different, I grant it that, but it is still good.  Anything written with emotion is great.

Don't Drink and Park!
Accidents may cause People!

[This message has been edited by HopelessRomanticGuy (edited 12-12-2001).]

prov1717
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since 2001-12-26
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6 posted 2001-12-26 08:55 PM


i'm happy you two were able to maintain your friendship
good poem.
peace
lesie

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
7 posted 2001-12-26 10:00 PM


Im happy that this had a happy ending to it i love happy endings!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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8 posted 2001-12-26 11:09 PM


"friend" is key.  That one word can make a world of difference when it comes to relationships.  Good luck..

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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