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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
You are the star That fell upon me- That sparkled like magic Upon my eyes, above me Your passionate love And comforting warmth Your sweetest words And tender touch Your beating heart Your loving soul that I long yet to see Your sparkling eyes And mystic face Your smile that glows Through my everyday needs The sweetest things You do for me Makes me sink Into your arms, beneath me And drowns me ever so deep |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
...wow... It--it---wow... Absolutley stunning...you're definetly top rank PiP material... WOW!!! My name is Alex...I don't go looking for trouble---but when it finds me, I fight back! |
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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
thanks babe! that really means alot to me! this one didnt take me that long to write... i already kinda had it started... a couple of days ago when i just started talkign to you... so like yesterday! i hope we last a while!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very nice. You've said a lot and it's good to see the recipient appreciates it.  ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Very pretty. Isn't it nice to be free? Nice to see beauty in his every move? I enjoyed reading this. It was a pleasure. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sweet I like it a lot. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww, another very sweet piece from you. Obviously enjoyed by Alex! And me, of course. Nicely done.--Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
i jus cant get over how cute it is to have a couple in pip...omg i think im gonna cry ::sniffles::..im jus so happy for you guys!! what a cute poem...enjoyed it lots! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
such an enchanting poem I'm happy for you It's a quite rare to see happy poems in here hope you show this person the poem thanks for the read and keep sharing là où est mon amour? |
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