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Honey
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since 2001-10-09
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0 posted 2001-12-07 12:33 PM


I thought you were my friend
But true friends never lie,
Friends are always there for you
Espcially when you cry.

But oh not you you have no time
But you expect me to be there,
Drop everything just for you
About my feelings you do not care.

And just for you I drop my life
When you have a rough day,
Just to let you know I care
So our frienship knots wont frey.

But then you go make fun of me
After I gave you all I had,
After I listend to your stupid problems
GRRRR!!!! you make me mad!

If I ever had a bad day
You never seemed to care,
It's like I'm an inconvenince to you
Like this friendship you cannot bare.

Well that's fine I'll leave you here
We will go our seprate ways,
I'm better off without you
I guess it was a hassle for you to stay.


© Copyright 2001 Honey - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
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1 posted 2001-12-07 01:32 AM


I'd just like to say out of all the people on passions you would have to write the poems that always seem to realate exactly to what I'm feeling or what I'm going through.This poem is about me and my former best friend because she took me for granit so I just stoped caring.I know how hard it is especially since I have to see her everyday and get her damn e-mails and of course she is trying to blame me and make me feel sorry for her.But be strong you can always e-mail me or whatever.I love this poem it's going in my library keep up the awsome work.I can't wait to read more you have a very special talent.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
2 posted 2001-12-07 12:36 PM


You know, if she told you all her problems you should use them to your advantage. Get back and use them against her. I did and I feel all the better for it. Keep strong and remember that revenge is always the best medicine.

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.



Dark Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-12-07 05:00 PM


Keep that in mind! That it's better to go your seperate ways and know that you are better off without her. 'Cause you are! You don't need people like that in your life. It's a shame that she's acting this way because I'm sure the reasons are due to a lack of self-confidence and her need to be loved. I had a "friend" like that once and that was her problem. So just keep your head up and remember that you're not the one losing a good friend, she is.

Thanks for posting this poem. I enjoyed reading it.

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

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Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-12-08 01:50 AM


Grrrr... this bugs me. I feel your pain. *hugs*
Nice write very emotional

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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5 posted 2001-12-21 10:16 AM


I see where you are coming from
maybe you need to talk
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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