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branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-12-06 08:53 PM

You left me lonely,
You left me blue,
You left me so quick,
I never had a clue,
I'll Show You!
You made me feel sad,
You made me feel mad,
You made me cry to my dad,
I'll Show You!
You left me for him,
You left me for another,
You left me when you knew I would never love another,
I'll Show You!
How much you hurt me,
How bad I feel,
How I lay in bed because I am ill,
How I loved you but you never cared,
I'll Show You!
Someday,
Maybe,
When im not afraid.

P.S. I still love you.

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

1 posted 2001-12-06 08:59 PM

very sad but nice poem it is filled with a lot of emotions.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

2 posted 2001-12-06 11:40 PM

Good write sweetie lots of emotion.... but what bout me???

~Ashley~

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-12-07 12:30 PM

Aww branden! *hugs*

Such strength throughout the piece then the end you lost it. Don't be afraid, matey. We have nothing to fear but fear itself. Just go up to her and tell the rat what you think.

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2001-12-07 04:44 PM

I liked it. You showed the mixed and complex sides of love loss very well. Hang in there. When you lose one it's because you were meant to find another.

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

5 posted 2001-12-08 03:17 PM

Well, thanks guys i love ya lots and well Ashley i dont know ya hun but what about ya? lol. Hehe i know what all u guys mean but hey im gonna be around here showing my lovely emotions again.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-12-09 08:39 PM

Awww... this is so sad. I'm sorry you lost your love, someone obviously very close to you. This is a nice vent though... keep writing about it. it helps.
*hugs*

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

7 posted 2001-12-09 09:12 PM

i sooooooo know hwo this goes
love this piece

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Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-12-21 11:13 AM

Just be strong
it's ok to show em how much you love em still
just don't try to get back at em in a bay way

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

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