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gokorn1
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since 2001-12-04
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0 posted 2001-12-05 11:28 PM


if you want a mp3 reading of this email me

Why is it always you want something you can never have?
I am confused, fighting myself
Can’t you see it in me?
I try pull you closer, You push me away
Is it love not yet known
What have I done?
Why is it that your taken?
You’re the only thing I want in this world
Is it fear?
Do you see outside your fears?
It seems you tell lies and despise
Every second you’re around me
I'd do anything to see through your eyes
I’d do anything just to see through your lies
I wonder if this feeling will ever go away
Each day is more frightening with the anticipation of your call
But IM always let down
Should I take all the stupid bullstuff and run away?
You never gave me a chance
What’s wrong with me?
I could have been your everything
I could have been the one
Is it something I said or did?
Sometimes I ask myself
Why try?
Then I think of you and
I know why I try


I can remember when we first met
we could of really had good some times
when the success started to kick in
life turned into a mess.
Many nights, painful thoughts occurred
Is this a game?
You took no pride in me
If you asked if I needed you…
If you asked if I loved you
The answer is forever
I could have been your everything
What do I do now?
All I see, a hate deep inside
startles me,
your the only one who can save me
My throat I take grasp
Eyes roll back
Love racing trough my veins
I hate you, Can you feel my pain
It’s not worth it
I hate you
I really  hate you
OH my god I need you
Ahhhh I love you.

How can I cry over someone I never loved?
Never loved...

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Honey
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since 2001-10-09
Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada
1 posted 2001-12-05 11:52 PM


see sweetie you can write such lovly poems. I told you so.  This was beautiful, though it sux that you have to go trough the pain to write such a wonderful poem  Things will get better and if you need to talk email me cinderella_1872001@hotmail.com

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

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