Teen Poetry #5 |
A friend's love |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
this one has almost a completely different meaning than the last one i posted, but it is a poem i wrote at the same time i wrote the other one...so w/e...lol Pure, simple, true, that's what love hsould be. But what you've broughht, is nothing but tears and misery. To break her heart, would be such a crime. But I can't see what's gonna happen, I can't see in future time. You said you don't, even want to live like this. What did you think was gonna happen? one of us, you're oging 2 miss. You said you want, both me and her. but she's my friend now, and everything happened in such a blur. ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
||
© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved | |||
cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
Oh dear! ....thats a TOUGH situation to be in...ugh!...two friends and one guy...oh man...i just hope you guys get everything sorted out soon....i really wouldnt want to be in your situation especially if someones going to be hurt. good poem girly...i liked it...but it gave me shivers... |
||
lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
as said above, that's a really tough situation and I hope u work it out ok. Anywho, loved the piece! -Joe |
||
sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
Hey hun I know what this is about. God this has gone a full circle. This poem is great. And remember that no madder what he can tear me up inside but you'll always be my friend and i love you!!!! |
||
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Yeah very tough situation to go through I'm sorry.But great poem and I hope everything gets better for you soon. Lauren |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am proud of you dear Neice......you have learned......friendship when true, is worth more than millions. Luv ya hon. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |