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Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-12-05 08:43 PM


this one has almost a completely different meaning than the last one i posted, but it is a poem i wrote at the same time i wrote the other one...so w/e...lol

Pure, simple, true,
that's what love hsould be.
But what you've broughht,
is nothing but tears and misery.
To break her heart,
would be such a crime.
But I can't see what's gonna happen,
I can't see in future time.
You said you don't,
even want to live like this.
What did you think was gonna happen?
one of us, you're oging 2 miss.
You said you want,
both me and her.
but she's my friend now,
and everything happened in such a blur.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2001-12-05 08:52 PM


Oh dear! ....thats a TOUGH situation to be in...ugh!...two friends and one guy...oh man...i just hope you guys get everything sorted out soon....i really wouldnt want to be in your situation especially if someones going to be hurt. good poem girly...i liked it...but it gave me shivers...

       

  

i luve mi con-tray! lyke a big an brown stetch olan wiv losa sun!



lone_poet707
Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer
2 posted 2001-12-05 09:18 PM


as said above, that's a really tough situation and I hope u work it out ok.
Anywho, loved the piece!
  -Joe

sweetlilangel
Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26

3 posted 2001-12-05 09:51 PM


Hey hun I know what this is about. God this has gone a full circle. This poem is great. And remember that no madder what he can tear me up inside but you'll always be my friend and i love you!!!!
TopGunLauren
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
4 posted 2001-12-05 10:28 PM


Yeah very tough situation to go through I'm sorry.But great poem and I hope everything gets better for you soon.
  Lauren

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-12-05 10:35 PM


I am proud of you dear Neice......you have learned......friendship when true, is worth more than millions.  Luv ya hon.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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